It’s time for Friday Fictioneers. A little late this week. Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting and to Sandra Crook for this beautiful photo.
I just watched a documentary on sharks. I can’t help but write this story. Enjoy.
Genre: Science Thriller (100 words)
Shark Crime Investigations
Shark Crime Investigator Addison Gimpley patrolled Kipa Beach undisturbed, fixated on the water. Since the shark invasion, the beach emptied out. Five deaths in as many weeks.
A drop of blood was enough to lure the shark, but Addison ruled out local chicken sacrifices and its accompanied drumming vibrations as evidence for the shark’s actions.
But which shark? Tiger? Bull? He needed more data.
“Fancy a swim?” A woman tapped Addison. “You look at the ocean like it might drift away.”
“No, thank you. But don’t let me stop you.”
The carefree, thoughtless tourist has made an appearance. He waited.
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thought provoking indeed.
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Thanks, Parveen. Thanks for your comment!
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Amy that was in fact a superb post
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Thanks so much! Thanks for the lovely feedback.
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I really have no idea what is going on but I think I’m afraid to go into the water once again. Duh da duh da
Do you remember when Jaws was in the theater or are you too young? I was terrified that a shark would eat me in Lake Tahoe. Seriously terrified.
Happy belated Thanksgiving Amy.
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Tracey, I think you got the main gist. I revised it a little. I hope it’s more clear. Yes, I saw Jaws all right. Great flick. I hope you got over that, because Lake Tahoe is too pretty not to enjoy. Happy Thanksgiving to you, too! Thank you.
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she mustn’t be his type enough to discourage her. just saying. 😦
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He’s ruthless, Plaridel, and not very nice. 😦
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Let’s just say that five deaths in as many weeks would definitely discourage me too!
I’ll stick to the pool for now!
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Me too, Dale. And the jacuzzi!
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Reminds me to take the fish out of the freezer for dinner tonight. Shark steaks. 🙂 Fabulous story, Amy.
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Ha ha. Oh, yummy! Thanks so much, Reinhold. 🙂
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Wow he’s a bit brutal – shame the shark doesn’t eat him!
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Yes, indeed. Now that would be poetic justice, Louise!
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He’s pretty ruthless, stopping at nothing to gather his data. I love his name, though! Great story.
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That he is, Ali! Thanks so much. I’m glad you liked his name and my story. 🙂
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Shark Crime Investigators? Perhaps he should be a dolphin.
Are the sharks running in gangs and robbing schools of cod of their lunch money? Or are they making loans at outrageous interested rates and charging at arm & leg (literally) if you don’t pay up on time? Shark mafia, I’d call ’em.
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Ha! You’re hilarious, Russell. The sharks are most definitely running in gangs. I think the Shark Crime Investigator is equally scary. It’s a real thing, apparently. Or maybe it was just a made up thing for the show I watched. It made me laugh. Thanks, Russell.
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Hilarious reply, made me laugh very much.
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Russell makes me laugh, too!
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And then there were six. Brilliant little piece.
Visit Keith’s Ramblings!
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I have feeling it’s not looking good for the tourist. Thank you, Keith.
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Dedicated and ruthless investigator. And indiscriminate in his research methods too. Good one Amy.
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Dedication is usually a good trait, but when it’s combined with ruthlessness, I’m afraid death is unavoidable. 🙂 Thanks, Sandra.
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Dear Amy,
Five deaths? Do I hear six? Oh my, Addison is cold hearted, isn’t he? No sacrifice too great for science. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Right. It’s all in the name of science. There has to be that line you don’t cross. Evidently, Addison is not aware of it. Thank you, Rochelle.
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Addison Gimpley, how could you? Love that name and your evil twist!
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Oh, I’m glad you caught that. I just knew you would, Perry! Thanks.
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Oh, cruel, cruel Addison. Great story. I saw Jaws in the theatre as a teen, went home alone in the dark, and expected sharks around every corner. They still creep me out, but also fascinate me, like all creatures in the sea.
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Cruel. Yes, Gah. Not very nice, and the sad thing is no one will know just how cruel. Oh, sorry about your Jaws scare. Isn’t the sea amazing, and to think we’ve only explored 5% of it!
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That’s true, the oceans are amazing. 🙂
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LOL. That’s mean! I’m sure she has no idea her nickname is “Bait”.
Mine is here: http://www.aliceaudrey.com/?p=13016
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I almost entitled this “Shark Bait,” Audrey! Very mean, I agree. I’ll stop by. Thanks.
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His approach to getting more data is a little unorthodox! Yikes…poor woman!
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I know! Yes, he’s sneaky and quite unorthodox. I don’t think his colleagues would approve.
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That turned rather quickly.
You got me!
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Thanks, Dawn. Great!
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That Mr Gimpley has the cool objectivity needed to be a good researcher; he deserves his monthly pay cheque.
A shark story is something I hadn’t thought of, but the picture is one of such innocence, sharks should’ve been on the menu (metaphorically speaking). From time to time we need the sort of shock and awe you’ve delivered here.
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This picture doesn’t really say sharks to me, but you know…they are out there!! It was kind of on my brain, so I had to write it. It’s a lovely photo and brought quite a few different stories. Glad I could deliver something of shock and awe value. 🙂 Thank you, Patrick.
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Ah, this got me laughing. SCI: Shark Crime Investigator. A bunch of C-grade detectives that brush off potential vics… …Oh, you didn’t tag humor. Sorry.
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Oh, it is supposed to be funny! Thanks, Adam. I need to add the humor tag. I forgot!
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“But don’t let me stop you.” Oh my goodness gracious! The moral of the story is, always read the local news before venturing into unknown waters. Great story Amy.
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Right. A tourist might think,, “Wow, a deserted beach. What luck!” Thanks so much, Melanie.
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Love your story! I actually follow a shark blog… here is a link if you’re interested! https://sharkdevocean.wordpress.com/2015/10/23/shark-eating-barnacles/
Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving! xo
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Thanks, Kelly! Sharks are fascinating. I’ll check out that link. Thank you. Hope you did too! xox
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Hm. I wonder if Investigator Gimpley had anything to do with the other five deaths. That poor tourist. Also, I was intrigued to find out that local chicken sacrifices are a thing. 🙂
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Could be, Laura. Yes, the local chicken sacrifices were part of the investigation, as well as the vibrations from the drumming, which were recorded within the optimum range for a shark’s detection. Fascinating stuff! 🙂
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Loved the story. Did you deliberately give the investigator a name that’s an anagram of “deploying maids”? If not, it’s an amazingly apt coincidence.
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Thanks so much. No, it wasn’t deliberate at all. Ha! Sometimes I just get lucky. 🙂 Thanks for pointing it out.
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I true scientific mind! They are not called ‘mad scientists’ for nothing!!
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So true, Roger. I think Addison qualifies as one!
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Good story, Amy. Looks like Addison Gimpley got more data 😀
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Thanks, Dianne. I fear you could be right. 🙂
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Not quite murder? I wonder what the CPS would make of a case like this?
Good piece.
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Indeed, Mick. Addison Gimpley may be under investigation soon. Thank you.
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Such a shocker, Amy. There was nothing to suggest Addison was such a cruel dude… and then, pow! Foolish tourist= survival of the fittest. Very chilling!
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I guess this guy gets what he wants however he needs to get it. Exactly, Dawn. Survival of the fittest! Thanks.
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Good story, Amy. I think it’s a comination of him being ruthless and her being stupid. Some people just can’t believe something bad will happen to them. They should call that Jaws Beach. Well done. — Suzanne
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That’s for your insightful comment, Suzanne! A combination of ruthlessness and stupidity. That will get you every time! That would be an excellent name for the beach. I wonder if that name is really out there. I can’t imagine it would be very popular. 🙂
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It’s easy: when you hear the music you know the shark is white 🙂
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I know, then you don’t want to ever get back in the water again, Bjorn! Silly scientist. Doesn’t he have the soundtrack?
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Perfect example of a focused mind, only his focus is a bit unbalanced.
Great story.
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Yes, a tad unbalanced. That’s a good way to put it. Thanks so much!
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